I'm very intrigued in this world so far! military + fantasy is always a fun mix. Author has a very clear image of what his world looks like, which is always a plus!
Honest review: In my opinion, this novel has good story development, character design, and world-building — simple yet unique... The writing quality isn’t a problem either... Even though this novel isn’t my type, I started enjoying it after a few chapters... But the only problem is that your chapters are short and the pacing feels a bit fast... I hope you can improve that part...Glory! x'D
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